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You're making it so hard for me to be surprised. I can be the real me, no judgement in your eyes. Something about you makes everything seem okay I never ...

OK, so I've read both of your chapters and I would just like to say I'm in love with your story. When you describe things, I love the feel that ...

I liked this a lot. As TaylaChase said, this was very formal, and I like the medieval feel to it. (If that's not what you were going for, please don't ...

I really liked this. I liked how it really made you think about all the different possibilities and how it was rough around the edges instead of the usual polished ...

Wow. I loved it. =] Everything fit together perfectly to me. =] good job. WaterVyper really found all the little mistakes, so I can just tell you that you're a ...

Wow. This was totally incredible. Like Macs said, the emotion just rolled off of it. Your rhythm was a little sketchy, but still great. It just goes to show no ...

Wow. I liked this so much! The way your words twisted into different meanings but you still have a slight idea of what they're really about, well, I mean I ...

I think people are missing the point, she wants to share her life experiences, and you can't do that by--as she said-- pleasing everyone. It's like a life Bio. except ...

OK, so I don't have very much time but I just wanted to say that I really really really LOVED it and I can't wait to read more. I'm very ...

I loved it. =] It's really sad that she got hit by another car, but a coma is kinda......drastic. I know that's what everyone else said, but I'm just putting ...

Wow. So I loved it. I think you MC could use so more developing. Maybe you could go into detail about everything more, eh? It seemed kind of rushed to ...

Wow. I liked this a lot. I think in the first couple of lines you could use a more powerful beginning. But that's just me. Otherwise, I really did like ...

OK, so this was great. I just think that your rhyming got into the way of your full potential. I know i hate it when people say that to me, ...

Wow so this was really good. Your rhythm was choppy there for awhile....that would be my only complaint. I really liked the river part though, I connected to that. And ...

Well, I thought it was deep. I thought it portrayed a sad picture that was fuzzy around the edges because I didn't completely know what was going on. More detail ...